71. Sunday Ad Infinitum ~ 33

We’re barrelling onwards towards the end and I now realise I’ve already teased this episode twice before in the commentary. This is where the bit with the date caption pays off and this is where Nile makes his feelings known about too much exposition. If only everything in the series was as neat – those looking for nice tidy resolution should probably switch to reading The Rule Of Death instead.

Transcript

Week 39: Sunday

The narrative decompression… it’s getting worse?

Nile: Much worse.

Ignatz: Okay, but what about-

Nile: No! That’s it! No more exposition!

Week 39: Sunday

Ignatz: What the-? What are you doing?

Nile: What I should have done in the first place – followed the Golden Rule.

Ignatz: Golden-?

Nile: “Show, Don’t Tell.”

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